Ramla Zareen Ahmad

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Ramla Zareen Ahmed, 7 August 2017 at 10:13 on blog and Goodreads 
Author of feel-good, light romance novella
Shalini did a great job beta reading my light-hearted contemporary romantic novella. She provided a detailed chapter by chapter feedback on storyline, characters, writing, dialogues, setting, pacing and many other aspects. She highlighted both the strengths and the weaknesses, respectfully showed me how my story could be made better and suggested alternative phrases to improve my prose wherever required. I feel sure her comments will add a lot of value to my work. Thank you, Shalini 🙂

Ramla Zareen Ahmad, 7th March 2018 at 00:10

Shalini recently beta read my light-hearted contemporary romantic novella. It was my second time working with her, and I was as impressed by her services as before. She provided a detailed chapter by chapter analysis as well as an overall report on storyline, characters, writing, dialogues, setting, pacing and many other aspects. She highlighted both the strengths and the weaknesses, and pointed out things that were unresolved or unclear. She also suggested alternative phrases to improve my prose wherever required. Her feedback reached me a lot sooner than the agreed upon deadline, and she was both prompt and patient in answering my follow-up questions. I feel sure her comments will add a lot of value to my work. Thank you, Shalini 🙂